I was asked for more text, so I put in more text.
Actually, while it's true that a wordier page was requested, it was always the plan to have Volume 3 incorporate more exposition and dialogue. The first part had Ydriss give some background about herself in flashbacks and images, but the second half is mostly dialogue. World loving friends, rejoice!
I really need to carve out some time to do a proper page for the cast of characters and update my fan art page and add more information about the world and universe the story takes place in. I've only been promising these things for the last nine months or so and Narra's can only do so much.
JF